Well, JVQ, have you read the actual winning entries from the last competition?
Apocalypse Cow is pointed out by Terry Pratchett as not so much being down another trouser leg of time as just teetering on the crotch of the trousers of time (lovely metaphor :text-nocomment: ). And
Half-Sick of Shadows waits until much later in the book to spring its alternate universe twist.
The point is to make an alternate history, either by relatively normal means (like, say, if Lee Harvey Oswald turned out to be a worse shot than he was IRL), or by more fantastical means, but keeping within the bounds of realistic physics. I opted for the latter for all of my attempts for the TP Prize, as I find it hard (and f***ing
boring) to write something so mundane as an alternate history (or indeed any work) without something fantastic to spice it up. I've been spoiled by too much science fiction and fantasy.
So as long as your story has some significant difference to the world we know, even if it isn't fantastic, and you can justify it as being due to an alternate history, then go for it. And may the best writer win.
My original works for the TP Prize were inspired, as I mentioned, by the Quatermass serials of the 1950s. While this current story has no relation to the Quatermass serials, I used a lot of characters and story concepts from those story attempts. Never waste anything. Even when I get frustrated at the lack of progress, I still keep my old drafts. Why? It'll help when writing the new one to have some scenes you kept in mind.
And as for editors, mine is ready, my book isn't. I will have to do more than 80K words (yes, that's the lower word limit). I just think that 90K or just over is probably what the story needs to end naturally. But once I am, I have an editor to look at it. Hopefully, I'll get it finished in time for her to look over it and tell me if anything needs fixin'.
The 'heartwarming' (
) family reunion went well. It's one of the better parts in the book, as I managed to avoid and/or poke fun of the cliches that happen in scenes like that. And, of course, it ends, if not badly, then with at least one of the two people involved in imminent danger. But there's another coming up later that's a bit more standard, a bit more tugging-at-heart-strings emotional.
The 'heartwarming' family reunion was inspired by the sardonic line given by Dante in this scene from
Devil May Cry 3.