The Terry Pratchett Prize, Round Two...

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Quatermass

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Forgive the melodrama, though you've seen it enough times from me anyway.

81K now. I'm on the home stretch now. The end comes, beyond chaos...

Sh**, did I just channel Kefka? :eek:
 

Quatermass

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Well, if I did channel Kefka, I'd be dressing in garish clothing and making sadistic jokes that make the Joker pale in comparison.

 

Quatermass

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Tonyblack said:
:clap: :clap: :clap:
Congratulations and good luck! :laugh:
Thanks, but luck isn't what I need. :) I'm having the book critiqued by a friend before I send it off.

To celebrate, I'm re-watching almost every episode of Red Dwarf from the beginning, in preparation for the new series when it comes out. :laugh:

To be fair, the conclusion is a bit hasty and up in the air, but I'm more or less satisfied with the outcome.

:dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance:
 

Quatermass

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Jan Van Quirm said:
:clap: Well done - once you've got your editorial comments and review in you'll have plenty of wriggle room on the word count front to get things tidied up for submission ;)
Yeah. Anyway, I've got a celebration thread where I'm getting crunk. Feel free to join the tesfivities. :mrgreen:
 

Quatermass

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Okay, copy printed out, handed to my editor/target audience/brutal honest person. o_O

The music here is pretty appropriate...



Alan Silvestri, f[EFF]k yeah!
 

Jan Van Quirm

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Dunheved, Kernow
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Trying to keep my spirits up here - had got into a bit of a fallow patch but have just finished a couple of sections off and gone to 200 words shy of 126,000 and a few pages short of finishing the penultimate chapter. :think:

I'm kind of defining the 'alternative Earth' elements now, but I'm back to dithering on whether it's enough of a difference as it's really more fictional messing about with political history and not falling too far outside of the norm? I have invented a new country and stood some tribal culture on it's head, so I guess it's enough but maybe I'll just let the final word count decide. If I get the remaining half chapter done without breaking the 150,000 limit (which seems pretty attainable atm) then I'll probably go for it depending on editorial comment and review o_O
 
Jan Van Quirm said:
Trying to keep my spirits up here - had got into a bit of a fallow patch but have just finished a couple of sections off and gone to 200 words shy of 126,000 and a few pages short of finishing the penultimate chapter. :think:

I'm kind of defining the 'alternative Earth' elements now, but I'm back to dithering on whether it's enough of a difference as it's really more fictional messing about with political history and not falling too far outside of the norm? I have invented a new country and stood some tribal culture on it's head, so I guess it's enough but maybe I'll just let the final word count decide. If I get the remaining half chapter done without breaking the 150,000 limit (which seems pretty attainable atm) then I'll probably go for it depending on editorial comment and review o_O
Who's the editor? ;) otherwise I'd be glad to assist... :whistle:

Edit: at least at the reading part ;)
 

Jan Van Quirm

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:laugh: Well I may take you up on the reviewing side of it mC. I've got a v.g. editor who's been letting me have feedback as I've been writing so they only have two chapters to see too, but I have been getting several other people look at it for review purposes so I get commentary from people with different reading preferences and I haven't got anyone who has English as a second language so to speak - so yeah, if you're volunteering! ;)

This is the African story I was telling you about in August BTW :shifty: :laugh:
 

Jan Van Quirm

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No - it's simply a slightly different Earth to this one, which is why I'm not so sure that I should put this in for the competition.

The Rules said:
We will be looking for books set at any time, perhaps today, perhaps in the Rome of today but in a world where 2000 years ago the crowd shouted for Jesus Christ to be spared, or where in 1962, John F Kennedy’s game of chicken with the Russians went horribly wrong. It might be one day in the life of an ordinary person. It could be a love story, an old story, a war story, a story set in a world where Leonardo da Vinci turned out to be a lot better at Aeronautics. But it won’t be a story about being in an alternate Earth because the people in an alternate Earth don’t know that they are; after all, you don’t.
I think it does just about scrape it as it's going in a different direction after one of the recent African conflicts :shifty: :laugh:
 

Quatermass

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I can't do anything as pedestrian as a straightforward alternate history novel. I needed something fantastical driving the story, and yet the rules state that it has to follow the laws of physics. Never mind that they used time travel and parallel universe hopping in Half-Sick of Shadows without explaining it. Which was annoying once I got that book and read it. But what can you do?

God, my brain's so [EFF!]ing fuzzy, I can't write at the moment. Which is [EFF!]ing frustrating. I have two novels I want to rewrite, not to mention the new epilogue to my entry for the TP Prize. Argh! :angry-banghead:
 

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